Ritical reflection on mentoring and assessing

Assignment criteria will follow. My original essay is attached. I will send the feedback sheet so you can see where I went wrong. This will be a re-submition and therefore I will only be accredited 40% (the pass mark).

Assignment brief: you are required to sumit a 2000 word critically reflective account of your experience of mentoring and assessing a student in practice.

I hope my original essay will exlpain how my experience went. I just need to add more critical reflection to meet the pass mark!

I am a qualified Intensive care nurse. This course enables me to look after student nurses on the ward. I passed the practical side of the assignment I am just hopeless at essay writing.
My original reference will follow. Feel free to use more.