Ritical thinking subject ! i need expert on that! who can understand the form of essay!

Initially, my project consisted of three deadlines, and I closed 2, one last Essays. I will upload first two work to understand and countinue ! I order from here Annotated bibliography and my writer make a lot mistake! he didnt use any critical thinking arguments and counter arguments! so i get a low grade… for that i need GOOD WRITER ( i will upload instruction and revision from my tutore ) Please make this essay 70 percent at least for A lavel,,, it will affect all my overall….
IT IS VERY IMPORTANT My writer did a big mistake! he chose a topic about * Obessity in uk* but my thesis statement was *Obesity among adults and children in UK* so annotated bibliohraphy was failled!
Please chose good thesis statement *Obesity among adults and children in UK* .
i will upload tips from my teacher about essay plan!