Ryopreservation of Zebrafish Ovarian Follicles


I have this lab report that I wrote, I failed it due to plagiarism and I got some comment that I need to work on. I attached the essay, it need to be rewrite and checked for plagiarism and try to fix it as much as you can with the comments from my tutor. it needs a lot of adjustment and adding some parts to be good. please feel free to cut any parts that you think its not important or repeated and add more discussion as it appear in the tutor comments. I wrote the comments in a red blood line as the tutor write it. please pay attention to this comments an try to fix it as much as you can. So basically i want you to use my paper and rewrite it and add what you think will fix it.

Thank you

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You should cite the source of information (books and research journals etc.) throughout
your report and provide full details of the references in the reference list. Cited material should not be copied into your reportyou should use your own words throughout. The format of the references should be consistent and following the Journal of Cell Science referencing style.