UCAS) Personal statement for applying university

I need a personal statement for applying university which for UCAS.
In this statement no less than 4000 characters or 47 lines of text (including spaces and blank lines).
Please read carefully the website i gave you before you write it:)
This website is from ucas, there are some tips for you to write the personal statement.


My IELTS is 5.5 so can you base on my english level to write.

The subject i want apply is business management with marketing.
Im studying business foundation course in Oxford Bellerbys College.
I studied year 9 in Ashford school and GCSE course in Stover school.
I come from Hong Kong and i have been to uk study for 4 years already.

parents acceptation:
dad business man
mom business woman

basketball, ruby, football
reading business magazines
books related to current affairs and technology

work experience:
Trading phones online
Worked in Hong Kong Computer Association

excel in microsoft office
website creating

To be a successful international business man